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English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Other | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Yvonne Gallagher Ireland Local time: 12:12 | ||||||
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4 +5 | it was almost as if he were present |
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it was almost as if he were present Explanation: in the room -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 6 mins (2017-05-24 15:36:14 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- yes, you could say "I sensed his presence" as well as it is really about feeling as if he was actually there, present , in the room since he (the writer) has such a vivid memory of John O’Donohue at that moment... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 10 mins (2017-05-24 15:40:18 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Glad to help! -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 13 mins (2017-05-24 15:42:42 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- could be rephrased to fit sentence as: it was almost as if John O’Donohue were present in the room, as I recalled... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 days18 hrs (2017-05-27 10:00:32 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Some people firmly believe they can feel the presence of deceased friends/relatives acting almost like guardian angels or spirit guides. These people believe that the soul is eternal, even if the physical body is gone. This often stems from a strong yearning for that deceased person as there had been such a closeness between them... |
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